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Redline this, please ! by NotDamien Redline this, please ! by NotDamien
Redline this for me, please ! (This means, you take this, lower the opacity, && draw over it to show how it can be fixed. The neater, the better. Stick figures don't really help, sorry.)

I am so stuck. I hate this so much. AAAGH. I wanna finish it, but I think it's poopy. ; -; I just, don't like it. Idk. Doesn't feel right. Maybe it's his feet , or his legs are too thin.
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iEatMudkipz Featured By Owner Dec 29, 2012  Professional General Artist
^o^ Lower his belly button, then make the arm crossing go right above or over his belly button.
Make the legs and calves thicker ;o;
{doesn't have time to redline but I hope that helped. }
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NotDamien Featured By Owner Dec 29, 2012
Thanks for your feedback ! u vu /
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tapiLI Featured By Owner Dec 29, 2012
i... i-- have no idea what i'm doing. [link]
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NotDamien Featured By Owner Dec 29, 2012
Hahahaha, you tried. There there. Thank you very much !! u vu
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tapiLI Featured By Owner Dec 29, 2012
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CaptToast Featured By Owner Dec 28, 2012   Digital Artist
[link] Sorry for complete redlining. I just started from the top and went down (easiest for me). I wanted to draw something for you at the same time. To apologize for the bad redline and for being gone. orz
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NotDamien Featured By Owner Dec 28, 2012
No problem ! Thanks for your feedback !! u vu

THAT CHIBI [/LOVES IT FOREVER<333]
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GayGoblin Featured By Owner Dec 28, 2012  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
I think his torso may be just a tad too long and that's what's throwing it off--the legs look great in my opinion though ^^ (... I figured it was easier just to say it then try to draw all over it this time around xD)
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NotDamien Featured By Owner Dec 28, 2012
Really ? :iconlazycryplz: Thank you for your feedback ! ; v;
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