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Redline this, please !by *NotDamien

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^{Redline this for me, please ! (This means, you take this, lower the opacity, && draw over it to show how it can be fixed. The neater, the better. Stick figures don't really help, sorry.)

I am so stuck. I hate this so much. AAAGH. I wanna finish it, but I think it's poopy. ; -; I just, don't like it. Idk. Doesn't feel right. Maybe it's his feet , or his legs are too thin.}

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=iEatMudkipz Dec 29, 2012 Professional General Artist

_{^o^ Lower his belly button, then make the arm crossing go right above or over his belly button.
Make the legs and calves thicker ;o;
{doesn't have time to redline but I hope that helped. }}

*NotDamien Dec 29, 2012

^{Thanks for your feedback ! u vu /}

~Tapidoki Dec 29, 2012

^{i... i-- have no idea what i'm doing. [link]}

*NotDamien Dec 29, 2012

^{Hahahaha, you tried. There there. Thank you very much !! u vu}

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~CynicalError Dec 28, 2012 Digital Artist

_{[link] Sorry for complete redlining. I just started from the top and went down (easiest for me). I wanted to draw something for you at the same time. To apologize for the bad redline and for being gone. orz}

*NotDamien Dec 28, 2012

^{No problem ! Thanks for your feedback !! u vu

THAT CHIBI [/LOVES IT FOREVER<333]}

~GayGoblin Dec 28, 2012 Hobbyist Traditional Artist

I think his torso may be just a tad too long and that's what's throwing it off--the legs look great in my opinion though ^^ (... I figured it was easier just to say it then try to draw all over it this time around xD)

*NotDamien Dec 28, 2012

^{Really ? Thank you for your feedback ! ; v;}

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